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Re: johno's "Volume Four: Fugitives" « Reply #23 on Jan 6, 2009, 5:50pm »
Okay, a bit of feedback:
Since I haven't watched the Season 3 finale yet, I was surprised when I read the first script and saw that Ando had injected himself with...the formula, if I'm correct? But I've always thought Ando needed a power..... Anyways- at first, I wasn't too keen on Claude reappearing (ha- get that joke?) or Simone still being alive, but after I read "The Kill Squad", I started to think that maybe it wasn't such a bad idea after all. But I do like the reappearance of Monica- I always liked her and was disappointed we didn't see her all Season 3 (that's right, isn't it?) I'm also liking Ando's "powers" and what he can do now. The Tracy-Mohinder scene in the loft was very good. I can't really see Boone on Heroes, but I think you made the right choice in casting him. Now Chapter 2: I thought Kyle's ability was really cool. I liked the scene in the facility when Peter and the others rescued Simone, and then the scene between Tracy and Micah. In fact- the entire script from then on in was very good. Claire and Alex are obviously fugitives now, which is the whole point of this volume and I like how you've done that. Peter and the others are probably fugitives now as well, as are Matt and Daphne. And I can't wait to see what happens to Tracy, Micah and Monica...just when I thought I had her back, she gets taken away again! lol Good work, johno!
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Re: johno's "Volume Four: Fugitives" « Reply #24 on Jan 6, 2009, 6:30pm »
YAY! Thank you for the feedback dude!
You don't like Claude?
I get what you mean about Simone, but she just seemed to have so much unrealized potential, and I think cloning abilities would be extremely helpful in escaping the government.
I get what you mean about Simone, but she just seemed to have so much unrealized potential, and I think cloning abilities would be extremely helpful in escaping the government.
I don't really hate Claude, I just (at first) thought it was weird bringing him back three seasons later after the last time we saw him. But now, after reading "The Kill Squad" as well, I think it was a good idea
* The next episode, Chapter Five "With Open Arms..." is Hiro-centric. It will show Hiro finally learning he can be a hero without his powers. * Micah will be kidnapped. * Tracy will take a leadership role among the Fugitives and along with Hiro, Ando, Claire and Monica will go after Micah and try to save him. * Expect a Sylar-Tracy showdown near the end of the season.
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